To AI, or not AI: that is the Question

To AI, or not AI: that is the Question.

If you are warning me or criticizing my use of Artificial Intelligence in my writing, consider this: It’s a modern-day tool available to everyone.

I start with the basics of spelling and grammar. It’s much easier and faster to use Grammarly instead of thumbing through the pages of a dictionary (which, by the way, is nearly impossible for me due to the progress of my CMT).

Then, the fun part: After my first round of editing, I ChatGTB for a critique of my current project, Kraken Bay.

Be Careful What You Ask For

Question:
“As a book critic, what might you take exception with?”

Answer:
A book critique might take exception to the following areas in “Mystery at Kraken Bay”:
Character Development: The characters, particularly Billy and Mia, may lack depth. Their motivations and backgrounds could be fleshed out more to make them more relatable and multi-dimensional.

Pacing: The story’s pacing might be criticized for being uneven. Some sections, like the underwater adventure, are action-packed, while others, such as the initial exploration of the lighthouse, might feel slower and less engaging.

Plot Consistency: There could be concerns about plot consistency and logical flow. For instance, Ethan’s sudden appearance and connection to the lighthouse keeper might feel too convenient and underdeveloped.

Dialogue: The dialogue might sometimes be unrealistic or stilted, especially for the characters’ age groups. More natural and varied dialogue could enhance the story’s believability.

Clichés and Predictability: The story might be criticized for relying on everyday adventure and mystery tropes, making some plot twists and character actions predictable.

Exposition: There might be too much exposition, particularly in the form of dialogue, which can slow down the narrative and make it feel less dynamic.

Emotional Impact: The emotional stakes and impact of the story are lacking. The characters’ reactions to supernatural events and personal growth could be more deeply explored to create a stronger emotional connection with the reader.

Resolution: The story’s resolution may be too neat or rushed. More tension and complexity could make the crown’s final trials and restoration more satisfying.

These areas could be points of improvement to enhance the overall quality and engagement of the story.

1/16/24 – I will be busy today!